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Post by frankie on Feb 11, 2007 20:05:19 GMT -5
Okay Hermie! Here are my rules, and you will follow them *waves hand in oddly Jedi-like way* ^-^ 1-Nothing I say is meant to be offensive or mean, it's meant to help you reach your RPing potential. 2-You get to choose what we RP with, as long as I know what it is ^-^; 3-If you don't like or agree with something I say, just tell me in a nice voice (voice?  ) 4-*looks at secretary* Err.. anything else? *secretary shrugs* Ugh, I guess not. Just... be respectful and HAVE FUN! Okay, there they are. The only exception is #2, we're gonna RP Star Wars people, mmkay? NO BUTS! ^-^ I'm gonna play Charley A'denya Car'nen 'cause she's the main charrie in my SW story! ^-^ She's not a Jedi yet, though. You can be anyone you want. |
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 11, 2007 20:10:04 GMT -5
Okay!!! when are we RPing the Star wars people?
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Post by frankie on Feb 11, 2007 20:20:24 GMT -5
Right now. Here. So I can evaluate you and give you pointers. ^-^ I'll start:
Charley stepped into the cantina on Dantooine, yawning slightly. It was late at night, most sane people were asleep, but Kanrick had sent her out on another one of those damn jobs. She was supposed to sit there all night and keep an eye on the Ebon Hawk. All night! He must be out to kill me she thought bitterly as she sat at the bar and ordered a Juma Juice.
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 11, 2007 20:29:31 GMT -5
Mave saw a girl sitting alone, she wasn't sure itf the girl was lost, evil or just sitting. Mave looked around cautious and with one hand on her pistol shw tentativley approched the girl.
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Post by frankie on Feb 11, 2007 20:45:04 GMT -5
Okay, pretty good, just make sure to look over your posts before you post them to check for minor errors. And just for this lesson try to make your posts at least three to four sentences long and try to check your comma use. They help a lot, trust me. Also, in Star Wars, guns are called blasters ^-^ Geez, and I thought you were a REAL nerd ;D
Charley heard someone behind her and turned around, "Hi there!" she said in a friendly voice. Then she noticed that the woman had a blaster and her hand was on it. Charley gulped and grinned at the woman, "I hope you're not planning on using that." she said simply, not very bothered by the fact she could be shot at any moment.
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 11, 2007 20:49:36 GMT -5
Slightly relaxing her former death-grip on her blaster, Mave smiled back. Still tentative she aproached a little more. "Hi, I'm Mave" she said back equally friendly. If this girl was good, then she hoped to be friends, and if she was evil she'd be dead in amatter of moments so it wouldn't matter that she knew her name.
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Post by frankie on Feb 11, 2007 21:01:13 GMT -5
Muuuuch better! ^-^ You learn quickly! Nothing wrong with that post, keep RPing like that and you'll be perfect.  Charley smiled back and held out her hand for Mave to shake, "Nice to meet ya, I'm Charley!" she said, happy the woman was being friendly. She glanced at the bar, where the bartender had just put her Juma Juice (alcoholic, of course ^-^). She looked back at Mave, "You wan'a Juma?" she asked her, "It's on me." ((Hehe, next post I think I'll bring in... someone... *shifty eyes* hehehe... I control him, though, so don't get any ideas, he's Charley's man! XP Teehee!)) |
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 12, 2007 19:26:08 GMT -5
"Sure", Mave grinned, she was theilled that there would be no massacre. Plus a free drink, nothing better than that."So, what brings you here?" Mave inquired "Nobody comes here this late unless they're crazy."
((Okay!...wait, should i be scared???))
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Post by frankie on Feb 12, 2007 20:34:53 GMT -5
((Hehehe, nope!))
Charley grinned, "I'm here to-" she was cut off by someone shouting her name.
"Charley!" She turned around with a wide smile on her face to see a tall man with dark hair and eyes step into the cantina, looking dirgruntled and a bit annoyed. Charley waved him over, "Hi Atton!" she said brightly.
She glanced and Mave, "Mave, this is Atton, Atton, this is Mave!" she grinned happily.
Atton came to her side, a scowl on his face, "Kanrick told you to be watching for danger!" he hissed in her ear, ignoring the other woman.
She just grinned even wider and patted his cheek, "Don't worry, I'm attentive!" she reassured him.
He rolled his eyes and sighed, "That's what I was afraid you'd say." he muttered.
((Okay, we'll do your test for becoming a Branch Leader in parenthases at the end. Just answer these questions (hint: OOC is the parenthases thingy, Out of Character *whistles innocently*):
What is OOC?
When do you use OOC?
What's a good length for a post?
What's god moding?
How often should you check for updates?
And usually we'd RP to see if you're fit for the job, but we're already RPing, so... just answer those questions well and you're approved! ^-^))
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 12, 2007 20:41:03 GMT -5
Mave looked this Atton up and down. Very man-pretty, but being as she was herself, she instinctivley tensed up and readied herself for a fight. She smiled a bit "Mave." she noted. She still had to decide if she liked this Atton.
((Out of character
when you have something to say that's not in character
3 to 4 scentences give or take, except not take.
god modeling is when your character is perfect
check for updates as often as you can, cuz it's you and you're always on XD))
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Post by frankie on Feb 12, 2007 21:15:14 GMT -5
((Alright, you are now the Head of Pine Branch ^-^ Happy happy!))
Atton glanced at the woman, "Hey," he said shortly before looking at Charley again. "I swear, I don't get why-" Charley put a hand over his mouth.
"Shhh!" she whispered, "There might be spooks about!" she said seriously, nodding. Atton stared at her, raising an eyebrow incredulously, but she didn't move her hand. She looked at Mave, "And that is how you train males, just assert your dominance."
Atton stared even harder at Charley. Normally he would have punched her and made a sarcastic comment, but he had always made exceptions for her. Charley had always been special, since the moment he met her. It was funny, really, how one minute he wanted to shoot her and the next he wanted to... hold her. He shook his head to clear it and glared at the subject of his thoughts, who was now giggling and snorting madly, her hand still over his mouth.
Charley looked at Mave, still giggling, "So... W-what *snort* brings you here? Where are you *snort* from?" she giggled even more, for some reason findind nothing at all to be extremely funny.
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 13, 2007 12:43:39 GMT -5
Mave tried desperatley to control her laughter, but she failing miserablay. She flashed a wicked grin at Charley, "Dominance is definatley the way to go when it comes to men." She paused for a moment before answering the actual question. "I'm just one of those crazy insominiacs", she said with even more of a wicked grin.
((YAY! thankies!!))
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Post by frankie on Feb 13, 2007 17:32:47 GMT -5
Charley giggled even more, "Ooh, sounds interesting!" she said brightly.
Atton by this point was like -_-' Idiots... and had given up on trying to get away. He looked at the snorting and laughing Charley and started wishing he hadn't come out to scold her.
The bartender finally brought the Juma Juices and Charley grabbed one, gulping it down in one shot. She grinned madly and nudged Mave, "Drinky drinky!" she said, lifting Mave's Juma and waving it front of her face, finally moving her hand from Atton's mouth.
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Post by Cordelia on Feb 13, 2007 17:42:36 GMT -5
Mave grinned and snached her juice. In one swift movement she slammed her empty glass down on the table and motioned for the bartender to give them three more. *hell* she figured she may as well get on this Atton's good side.
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